the art is so cute! I love the character designs and the aesthestic is just very bright and warm, albeit a little short.
one thing is that maybe she can act more suprised? she seems very sure of what to do and we really don't get any context, maybe a short cutscene would work for backstory?
overall I like the characters and look forward to future developments!
This is quite pretty! :) Constructive criticism: keep an eye on the tenses (they can be pretty difficult lol). Maybe try a bit more subtlety, and space things out a bit. Someone who just got back their memories might be in shock, or may even feel excited, etc so adding/showing more of their emotions would be good~
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this is amazing!! can't wait for more <3
the art is so cute! I love the character designs and the aesthestic is just very bright and warm, albeit a little short.
one thing is that maybe she can act more suprised? she seems very sure of what to do and we really don't get any context, maybe a short cutscene would work for backstory?
overall I like the characters and look forward to future developments!
thank you very much! I know it's short next time if I make chapter 1 I'll make it longer.
I'll try to improve on these things in the future.
This is quite pretty! :) Constructive criticism: keep an eye on the tenses (they can be pretty difficult lol). Maybe try a bit more subtlety, and space things out a bit. Someone who just got back their memories might be in shock, or may even feel excited, etc so adding/showing more of their emotions would be good~
thank you! of course there's a some of mistakes that need to be corrected. This was very quickly done, I will do it in the future.
Hi guys, comment here what you think of the game, anything is welcome! :D
I think its pretty well done ^_^